Covers/Reviews/Polyvores
Cross Country
Spelling and Grammar: Like all your other reviews, the problem is punctuation. You don' have commas where they need to be. That's very vital in writing if you don't want to use periods. But other than that everything was good.
Plot and Story Line: I love how they met when they were younger. I thought that part was really cute! I especially love how she's still into stuffed animals when she's older. Your story is really cute!
I would give this story a 10/10.
Plot and Story Line: I love how they met when they were younger. I thought that part was really cute! I especially love how she's still into stuffed animals when she's older. Your story is really cute!
I would give this story a 10/10.
Notes
If I was a bit offensive, please tell me and I'll take your review down. I'm just being honest and giving you tips on what to do and what not to do. I'm trying to help you improve and that's my main goal of doing reviews. I'm not trying to be mean in anyway.
Are you still doing reviews?
9/18/14