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Oblivion

Spelling and Grammar: There weren't that much, just little words that you misspelled once, then didn't go back and fix, like your first inevitable in the first chapter was spelled wrong, but later on it was spelled right. Just go back and read over your chapters to fix your errors.

Plot and Story Line: I really like it. It's different and very unique. I love how the girl is with her best friend when they find out. The plot isn't overused and is fresh. Please update soon, love!

I would give this story a 10/10.

Notes

If I was a bit offensive, please tell me and I'll take your review down. I'm just being honest and giving you tips on what to do and what not to do. I'm trying to help you improve and that's my main goal of doing reviews. I'm not trying to be mean in anyway.

Comments

Are you still doing reviews?

One Direction 1O1 @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
9/18/14

Author's Name: LuMichAshCalHoClifIrwHemmings
Name of Story: Good Girls Are Bad Girls
Characters I Want On Cover: Demi Lovato (Blonde), Avril Lavigne (Blonde And Green Hair), 15 year old Luke, and 17 year old Luke.
Anything Special: Author Name and Title.

Thank You SOSOSOSOSO much I suck at making covers.