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You Belong With Me

Spelling and Grammar: Okay, there was a lot of grammar mistakes. Make sure you read it over because some words were repeated in one row. After a while, it gets kind of confusing. If you ever need help with grammar or editing, just message me and I'll help you.

Plot and Story Line: It was actually pretty good. I don't normally read Larry Stylinson fanfics because I believe they have a bromance not a romance. I'm actually interested in reading more of it. It's different than the others and I wouldn't mind reading it.

I would give this story a 9/10.

Notes

If I was a bit offensive, please tell me and I'll take your review down. I'm just being honest and giving you tips on what to do and what not to do. I'm trying to help you improve and that's my main goal of doing reviews. I'm not trying to be mean in anyway.

Comments

Are you still doing reviews?

One Direction 1O1 @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
9/18/14

Author's Name: LuMichAshCalHoClifIrwHemmings
Name of Story: Good Girls Are Bad Girls
Characters I Want On Cover: Demi Lovato (Blonde), Avril Lavigne (Blonde And Green Hair), 15 year old Luke, and 17 year old Luke.
Anything Special: Author Name and Title.

Thank You SOSOSOSOSO much I suck at making covers.