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My Decisions
Spelling and Grammar: There were small errors that you can easily read over and catch them. There weren't any spelling errors, which is good.
Plot and Story Line: It's different and I like it. it's different from that normal falling in love when you first meet them. I like how she's known Liam her whole life and how she's still in school. And how her good for nothing boyfriend is jealous of her hanging with the boys even though he just blew her off. There was so much feeling in it and I like that. Please update soon!
I would give this story a 10/10.
Plot and Story Line: It's different and I like it. it's different from that normal falling in love when you first meet them. I like how she's known Liam her whole life and how she's still in school. And how her good for nothing boyfriend is jealous of her hanging with the boys even though he just blew her off. There was so much feeling in it and I like that. Please update soon!
I would give this story a 10/10.
Notes
If I was a bit offensive, please tell me and I'll take your review down. I'm just being honest and giving you tips on what to do and what not to do. I'm trying to help you improve and that's my main goal of doing reviews. I'm not trying to be mean in anyway.Your cover should be up later. I'm so sorry. I did not
Are you still doing reviews?
9/18/14