Invisible Cage
Spelling and Grammar: Some words were misspelled and you keep changing from past to present. It makes it kind of confusing when you read it. To get rid of grammar or spelling errors, just reread your chapter over and over before publishing. Other than those things, your grammar was good.

Plot and Story Line: I like how the girl doesn't like One Direction, but she doesn't want to upset her sister so she decided to go anyways. She's not crazy over One Direction. That makes the story so much more realistic. Yes, One Direction have many fans, but you have to remember those people who can tolerate their music but could care less about them.

I would give this story a 9/10

Diana
Spelling and Grammar: There wasn't any errors.

Plot and Story Line: Although it is an overused plot, I really like it. Yes, people write about Diana songs ever since that song came out. Yes, it's a bullying story. But it's exciting and different. This was a story I was already subscribed to and I really enjoyed reading it.

I would give this story a 10/10.

Notes

If I was a bit offensive, please tell me and I'll take your review down. I'm just being honest and giving you tips on what to do and what not to do. I'm trying to help you improve and that's my main goal of doing reviews. I'm not trying to be mean in anyway.