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Too Late For Regrets

Spelling and Grammar: There was only one grammar mistake that you made every time you wrote a dialogue. Make sure the punctuation goes inside the quotation marks. Other than that, your grammar and spelling looked good.

Plot and Story Line: Your plot is very different and not predictable. I like that. I can actually get into your story and read it all day. I like how you started off with a dream. Most stories start off with reality rather than dreams. Please update soon!

I would give this story a 10/10.

Notes

If I was a bit offensive, please tell me and I'll take your review down. I'm just being honest and giving you tips on what to do and what not to do. I'm trying to help you improve and that's my main goal of doing reviews. I'm not trying to be mean in anyway.

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Are you still doing reviews?

One Direction 1O1 @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
9/18/14

Author's Name: LuMichAshCalHoClifIrwHemmings
Name of Story: Good Girls Are Bad Girls
Characters I Want On Cover: Demi Lovato (Blonde), Avril Lavigne (Blonde And Green Hair), 15 year old Luke, and 17 year old Luke.
Anything Special: Author Name and Title.

Thank You SOSOSOSOSO much I suck at making covers.