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Spelling and Grammar: There weren't any.

Plot and Story Line: I've never read anything like this. Most stories are romance or punk love. Never Harry does something bad and has to do community service. I would recommend everybody to read this story because it is so amazing and I'm in love with it.

I would give this story a 10/10.

The Fire in His Eyes
Spelling and Grammar: There were small errors, more like typos that happens to everybody every once in a while. Other than that, your grammar and spelling are good.

Plot and Story Line: It's very different and I like it. You have amazing stories. I like how when Liam gets mad it's hard to stop him. It takes me to a different world and I actually enjoy that. Please update!

I would give this story a 10/10.

Notes

If I was a bit offensive, please tell me and I'll take your review down. I'm just being honest and giving you tips on what to do and what not to do. I'm trying to help you improve and that's my main goal of doing reviews. I'm not trying to be mean in anyway.