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Plot and Story Line: It's very good. I actually can feel what's going on and I feel like I'm there with him. I am in LOVE with your story. It's just so different and unique. I also like how you have everybody caring for him, but he just wants to be alone and his life is being ruined. I have never read a story like yours. Please update soon!
I would give this story a 10/10.
Plot and Story Line: It's very good. I actually can feel what's going on and I feel like I'm there with him. I am in LOVE with your story. It's just so different and unique. I also like how you have everybody caring for him, but he just wants to be alone and his life is being ruined. I have never read a story like yours. Please update soon!
I would give this story a 10/10.
Notes
If I was a bit offensive, please tell me and I'll take your review down. I'm just being honest and giving you tips on what to do and what not to do. I'm trying to help you improve and that's my main goal of doing reviews. I'm not trying to be mean in anyway.I'm really sorry for the wait. Hope you can forgive me.
Are you still doing reviews?
9/18/14