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Spelling and Grammar: There weren't any grammar or spelling mistakes so far!

Plot and Story Line: I love how you write. It's just so different and unique. I especially liked how you used somebody who is Chinese to be in the story rather than it being all American or British characters. I love how she's 21 and still living with her parents.

I would give this story a 10/10.

Notes

If I was a bit offensive, please tell me and I'll take your review down. I'm just being honest and giving you tips on what to do and what not to do. I'm trying to help you improve and that's my main goal of doing reviews. I'm not trying to be mean in anyway.

Comments

Are you still doing reviews?

One Direction 1O1 @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
9/18/14

Author's Name: LuMichAshCalHoClifIrwHemmings
Name of Story: Good Girls Are Bad Girls
Characters I Want On Cover: Demi Lovato (Blonde), Avril Lavigne (Blonde And Green Hair), 15 year old Luke, and 17 year old Luke.
Anything Special: Author Name and Title.

Thank You SOSOSOSOSO much I suck at making covers.