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Teenage Dirtbag

Spelling and Grammar: There were a lot of spelling errors. You spelled bitchiness like bitchyness. There's a couple more that if you read over it you'll catch them. Try describing things more, so people will be able to visualize it in their mind.

Plot and Story Line: I like how you make the girl's friend bully the nerd and she stops it to protect him because it's in her nature not to let anybody get hurt. I just need that description so I can get into it more. Other than that I couldn't find anything wrong with your story.

I would give this story a 7/10.

Notes

If I was a bit offensive, please tell me and I'll take your review down. I'm just being honest and giving you tips on what to do and what not to do. I'm trying to help you improve and that's my main goal of doing reviews. I'm not trying to be mean in anyway.

Comments

Are you still doing reviews?

One Direction 1O1 @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
9/18/14

Author's Name: LuMichAshCalHoClifIrwHemmings
Name of Story: Good Girls Are Bad Girls
Characters I Want On Cover: Demi Lovato (Blonde), Avril Lavigne (Blonde And Green Hair), 15 year old Luke, and 17 year old Luke.
Anything Special: Author Name and Title.

Thank You SOSOSOSOSO much I suck at making covers.