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His or Mine?

Spelling and Grammar: There was a couple in there that you can just go back and read in order to find them. You put the wrong there. It should have been their.

Plot and Story Line: I really like your plot. It's not like the others. I like how she moves from Florida to Canada expecting it to be horrible, but as she gets closer she wants to try something new. I can actually relate to the story. Please update!

I would give this story a 10/10.

Notes

If I was a bit offensive, please tell me and I'll take your review down. I'm just being honest and giving you tips on what to do and what not to do. I'm trying to help you improve and that's my main goal of doing reviews. I'm not trying to be mean in anyway.

Comments

Are you still doing reviews?

One Direction 1O1 @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
9/18/14

Author's Name: LuMichAshCalHoClifIrwHemmings
Name of Story: Good Girls Are Bad Girls
Characters I Want On Cover: Demi Lovato (Blonde), Avril Lavigne (Blonde And Green Hair), 15 year old Luke, and 17 year old Luke.
Anything Special: Author Name and Title.

Thank You SOSOSOSOSO much I suck at making covers.