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Spelling and Grammar: A lot of the punctuation is in the wrong spot. Some places you have commas where periods need to be and vice versa. Another thing is after dialogue there needs to be a space so people don't get so confused. There weren't any spelling errors, so good job on that!

Plot and Story Line: I really like how you write. It's very unique and I especially love this story. It isn't too confusing and I love how you describe things. You don't give away too much or too little. Keep up the good work and continue writing this amazing story!

I would give this story a 8/10.

Notes

If I was a bit offensive, please tell me and I'll take your review down. I'm just being honest and giving you tips on what to do and what not to do. I'm trying to help you improve and that's my main goal of doing reviews. I'm not trying to be mean in anyway.

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Are you still doing reviews?

One Direction 1O1 @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
9/18/14

Author's Name: LuMichAshCalHoClifIrwHemmings
Name of Story: Good Girls Are Bad Girls
Characters I Want On Cover: Demi Lovato (Blonde), Avril Lavigne (Blonde And Green Hair), 15 year old Luke, and 17 year old Luke.
Anything Special: Author Name and Title.

Thank You SOSOSOSOSO much I suck at making covers.