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The girl, The boy, and the Jealous

Spelling and Grammar: There wasn't any. Good job!

Plot and Story Line: I love your plot and I can't wait until you update. Even though your writing style is different, I can actually get into the story. It's so interesting and it makes me want more. I really, really like it. You are brilLIAM. See what I did there?

I would give this story a 9/10

Notes

If I was a bit offensive, please tell me and I'll take your review down. I'm just being honest and giving you tips on what to do and what not to do. I'm trying to help you improve and that's my main goal of doing reviews. I'm not trying to be mean in anyway.

Comments

Are you still doing reviews?

One Direction 1O1 @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
9/18/14

Author's Name: LuMichAshCalHoClifIrwHemmings
Name of Story: Good Girls Are Bad Girls
Characters I Want On Cover: Demi Lovato (Blonde), Avril Lavigne (Blonde And Green Hair), 15 year old Luke, and 17 year old Luke.
Anything Special: Author Name and Title.

Thank You SOSOSOSOSO much I suck at making covers.