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Dance For Me

Spelling and Grammar: There weren't that much spelling and grammar errors. You did a really good job at describing and having detail. I actually felt like I was there. I also could feel the emotions that she felt.

Plot and Story Line: I was only able to read one chapter, but your story is beautiful! I love it. It's just so different and unique. I especially liked how when she saw him, the world seemed to stop and she felt like she was rising, not sliding. This is one of my favorite stories now. Words can't even describe how I feel at this moment. This story really got to me.

I would give this story a 10/10.

Notes

If I was a bit offensive, please tell me and I'll take your review down. I'm just being honest and giving you tips on what to do and what not to do. I'm trying to help you improve and that's my main goal of doing reviews. I'm not trying to be mean in anyway.

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One Direction 1O1 @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
9/18/14

Author's Name: LuMichAshCalHoClifIrwHemmings
Name of Story: Good Girls Are Bad Girls
Characters I Want On Cover: Demi Lovato (Blonde), Avril Lavigne (Blonde And Green Hair), 15 year old Luke, and 17 year old Luke.
Anything Special: Author Name and Title.

Thank You SOSOSOSOSO much I suck at making covers.