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Let Me Love You

Spelling and Grammar: It seems to me that you are having a hard time with getting the long chapters that you want. Well something you can do is go on docs.google.com, word, or whatever you have. You can easily save it, then go back to it when you need to. I promise you'll have the long chapters you want and love. There were a couple of spelling and grammar mistakes, not that much.

Plot and Story Line: I can't really say anything about it since there isn't really that much to go off of. It'll be wrong for me to.

I can't really rate your story with only a couple of paragraphs.

Notes

If I was a bit offensive, please tell me and I'll take your review down. I'm just being honest and giving you tips on what to do and what not to do. I'm trying to help you improve and that's my main goal of doing reviews. I'm not trying to be mean in anyway.

Comments

Are you still doing reviews?

One Direction 1O1 @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
9/18/14

Author's Name: LuMichAshCalHoClifIrwHemmings
Name of Story: Good Girls Are Bad Girls
Characters I Want On Cover: Demi Lovato (Blonde), Avril Lavigne (Blonde And Green Hair), 15 year old Luke, and 17 year old Luke.
Anything Special: Author Name and Title.

Thank You SOSOSOSOSO much I suck at making covers.