AUTHOR'S NOTE (annoying fanfic moments, story reviews, random notes and SONG REVIEWS)

This story has a really great plot, I love it! What you're writing about is something that happens to a lot of people, and it's good that you're taking it more seriously than some people who write about this. Hopefully (if the story gets happy) readers who have anorexia or are starting to will realize that it's not good for them, and they are perfect already.
Just one thing though: in the first chapter (I think) you wrote: "your perfect". Your and You're are different; your is when it belongs to someone, and you're is the abbreviation of you are:). Also, watch your grammar slightly. In most places it is understandable but before it gets confusing, watch it!;)
My Ratings:

Grammar: 8.5
Detail: 9
Interesting-ness: 9
Want to carry on reading: 9
Overall: 9

good job!

For those of you who want to read Am I Perfect Yet?, here's the link: (it's by ShatteredPorcelain)
http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/46305/Am-I-Perfect-Yet/
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