AUTHOR'S NOTE (annoying fanfic moments, story reviews, random notes and SONG REVIEWS)

Wow. I've only managed to read 3 chapters, but... just wow. It's so good, so descriptive, I love it!! It's so sad though, I couldn't imagine going through that pain...
There's just one thing you're missing: You keep switching from past tense to present tense and it's a little confusing. Just a little, though:).
I think you should just decide on one tense and keep it that way, to avoid more confusion.
I'm sorry i couldn't read more chapters, I really want to read this all the way through, but please understand I don't have much time, and I have a few more reviews to do:/.
My Ratings:
Grammar: 10
Detail: 10
Interesting-ness: 9.5
Want to carry on reading: 10

It's amazing!:3

For those of you who want to read I Bet, here's the link: (it's by Jade Styles)
http://www.harrystylesfanfiction.com/Story/38992/I-Bet/

You guys should read this it's great. x

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