AUTHOR'S NOTE (annoying fanfic moments, story reviews, random notes and SONG REVIEWS)

It is pretty good, honestly, but just remember one thing: When someone is speaking and another person replies or speaks after, you need to separate it by a line. For example:

"Hi," Louis smiled.
"Hey!!" Eleanor replied, hugging him.

What you've been doing is this:

Hi," Louis smiled. "Hey!!" Eleanor replied, hugging him.

I'm not gonna hate or criticize you for that, just remember do do it otherwise the reader will get confused about who is speaking. :)
My Ratings:

Grammar: 10
Detail: 8.5
Interesting-ness: 8.5
Want To Carry On Reading: 9
Overall: 8.5

Keep it up!:) x

For those of you who want to read It All Started On That Farm, here's the link: (it's by Savanna and Niall)
http://www.niallhoranfanfiction.com/Story/46533/It-all-started-on-that-farm/

Enjoy! x

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