AUTHOR'S NOTE (annoying fanfic moments, story reviews, random notes and SONG REVIEWS)

This story has a really good plan and it's good that you're keeping in present tense as you write, because I've read some really great fanfictions, but they tend to shift from present tense to past tense and it's a Little confusing, so great job on that!
I only managed to read a couple of chapters, sorry about that!!
I have to answer honestly, this story hasn't hooked me as much as some others, but as you say it will lead to something bad, because it seems so harmless right now, I honestly DO wanna keep reading.
My Ratings:

Grammar: 10
Detail: 9
Interesting-ness: 9
Want To carry on Reading: 9.5
overall: 9.5

Great job and keep it up!!

For those of you who would like to read How We Met, here's the link: (it's by Stampy Cat)
http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/45699/How-We-Met/

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