AUTHOR'S NOTE (annoying fanfic moments, story reviews, random notes and SONG REVIEWS)

Wow!! This is really good! I thoroughly enjoyed this, although I don't have much time, so I only got to chapter 9 (chapter 5) but seriously this is great stuff! You just earned yourself a new subscriber!! It's amazayn, if i had more time I would've read till the last chapter, and when I do I will.
Honestly, don't worry about the grammar, it was honestly pretty good! And I love the way you write how they speak, it's understandable and really good!
here are my ratings:

grammar: 8.5
detail: 8
interesting-ness: 10
want to carry on reading: 10
overall: 9

For those of you who would like to read Friend Or Foe?, here's the link: (it's by Piper charms)
http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/41829/Friend-Or-Foe/

Notes

don't stop requestiiiiing!>.< x