AUTHOR'S NOTE (annoying fanfic moments, story reviews, random notes and SONG REVIEWS)

Omg this story is so cool; I love it! Well done!:3 I can really visualize every Little detail in my head, and I have to read more. There's just one art where from past tense you switch to present tense, for a few lines, and then back to past. Please watch this. Another thing, just once you write to instead of too.
To: I am going to...
Too: I wanna come too
But don't worry! It is understandable!

My ratings
Grammar: 10
Detail: 9.5
Interesting-ness: 10
WTCOR: 10
Overall: 10
Again, well done!

For those of you who want to read Dream, here's the link: (it's by Allessandra) http://www.niallhoranfanfiction.com/Story/50487/Dream/
enjoy Reading it, you won't get bored! c:

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