AUTHOR'S NOTE (annoying fanfic moments, story reviews, random notes and SONG REVIEWS)

Woah. This story is really good, I love the way it sounds so dark!! I only managed to read 2 chapters, but I really want to read more! You left the end of chapter two at a cliffhanger, so i really have to know about the hangman game!! Just one thing, though: you are also switching tenses quite a lot, and it does sometimes get confusing. Just fix that one thing, and you'll have yourself a subscriber!!!
My Ratings:

Grammar: 10
Detail: 9
Interesting-ness: 10
Want To Carry On Reading: 10

great story!;)

For those of you who want to read Because She's Bad, here's the link: (it's by Marilyn_Lives) http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/47914/Because-Shes-Bad/

enjoy!! x

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