AUTHOR'S NOTE (annoying fanfic moments, story reviews, random notes and SONG REVIEWS)
STORY REVIEW: THE JOB THAT CHANGED IT ALL
First off, this is a really good story. i LOVE all the detail there is, how you describe places and everything, it really is great. Although sometimes you switch just slightly from past tense to present tense, so look at that carefully:) It doesn't happen much, though!
my ratings:
Grammar: 10
Detail: 10
Interesting-ness: 9.5
want to carry on reading: 9.5
overall: 10
perfect!!:P
For those of you who want to read The Job That Changed It All, here's the link: (it's by CharlieRose)
http://www.harrystylesfanfiction.com/Story/37888/The-Job-That-Changed-it-All/
@Frogalaxy
Thanks so much, I listened to Overload and they're just so *o*
x
8/28/14