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Being loved by you

Chapter 4

"His name is Niall." Jenny replied referring to the most attractive guy I've ever seen.
I couldn't help but stare at the way his blonde hair looked and the way his blue eyes sparked like the ocean.. he was absolutely perfect and there was no doubt about that. I snapped out of my thoughts and saw him looking at me. Great. Now he knows I was staring at him like some kind of weirdo.. I know was starring but he make my heart leap. Niall.. that's the most sweet sounding name I've ever heard.. I snapped out of my thoughts again to see him walking toward Jenny and I with a cup of coffee in his hands. He began to smile and so did I. He began to talk but I was so amazed by him that I couldn't fully understand what he was saying.
"AMY!" Jenny yelled finally getting my attention.
"What?" I asked looking at Niall again.
"Niall asked you a question." Jenny smirked.
Oh no.. What did he say? I was so busy looking at Mr. Perfect I couldn't comprehend what he was saying.



Notes

What did Niall ask?



Comments

@Savanna and Niall
Thanks so much for the advice. I will make them longer too.

njhlatte njhlatte
5/18/14

I love yours story but there 2 problems. 1. You need to make them longer. 2.your very good at describing things but this is kinda rushed. I would slow,it down.