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Being loved by you

Chapter 3

I walked into the coffee shop and ordered my usual drink. After I paid for my drink I sat down and took in my surroundings. Everything was the same but I noticed a very pretty girl around my age sitting in the corner on a couch drinking a latte. Her outfit was so cute I had to complement her. I walked over to her and tapped on her shoulder gently. "I love your outfit!" I exclaimed. "Thank you so much I just got it yesterday at forever 21!" She told me with a wide smile.
"So.. do you wanna sit down?" She asked me gesturing to the spot next to her.
"Sure, um I'm sorry.. What's your name?" I asked a bit embarrassed.
"Oh, I'm Jenny. What's your name?" She asked curiously.
"Amy, my name is Amy." I replied smiling. I really like Jenny, she is kind and makes me feel happy and I've just met her. I heard the door open and saw a guy with blonde hair and the most beautiful blue enter. "Who is he?" I asked

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Comments

@Savanna and Niall
Thanks so much for the advice. I will make them longer too.

njhlatte njhlatte
5/18/14

I love yours story but there 2 problems. 1. You need to make them longer. 2.your very good at describing things but this is kinda rushed. I would slow,it down.