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Being loved by you

Chapter 2

After I heard Olivia slam the door shut I decided to get out of bed. I'm not going to let her make me sad although it's hard to let her walk away from me. She is the only person I have.. even if she is beyond rude I'll always love her. I made my way to the bathroom and saw Olivia's makeup everywhere, I guess she was too busy thinking about her jerk of a boyfriend Joseph to clean up. She could find someone so much better but I guess he is attractive. As I cleaned up the mess in the bathroom I looked in the mirror. I didn't notice the tears streaming down my face. I wish I wasn't so emotional.. I always let everything and everyone get to me. I took a piece of toilet paper and dried my tears. I decided to get my mind off things and go to get some coffee at Starbucks since Olivia broke my coffee pot last week. I put on a sweater and some jeans and drove to Starbucks.

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Comments

@Savanna and Niall
Thanks so much for the advice. I will make them longer too.

njhlatte njhlatte
5/18/14

I love yours story but there 2 problems. 1. You need to make them longer. 2.your very good at describing things but this is kinda rushed. I would slow,it down.