One direction annoying and stupid moments!

I hate when people describe nothing or bare ally like it would be awesome fan fiction if you put 10x more effort inside of it.
Bad example:

I walk in my school,found louis my boyfriend.We hug he smiles.
"I love you."He said.
"Love you too."I said.Then we walk to our classes.

Just no never te tie to ever do that!That wants me to die in a hole at my best friends house(Inside joke between my bf's)

better example:

I walk threw the doors and I look around for Louis my boyfriend,But I could not spot him between all the populars.I look around but I finally spot him.,he spots me too.I run too him and give him a huge hug.I just got back from Florida and I haven't seen him in a week.
"I missed you so much."He said pulling away and smiling.
"I missed you too,Well since I'm late I need to get to class bye love you."I say drifting away from him.
"Bye love ,love ya too."He says walking to his 1st period class.


See which one is better *coughs* the better example.But be describe but don't be like every little detail like how he as a eyelash on his cheek.Be in middle!

-Brittany

Notes

I got back from first cheer practice!I have tryouts on thurs.So nerve wreaking!Omg!Help but today had to be at a track meet that was my last and most important and a choir concert and cheer practice.If I did not go to cheer can't be in it.Choir is a grade and track I am one the best girl long jump.I picked cheer and choir even tho I felt so bad skipping track! XC

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