One direction annoying and stupid moments!

Okay well just like very recently Ive read 2 stories called 3 am and I'll Love You Till It Hurts,
the 2nd story I named type it exactly like that cause other wise it will not pop up is you look for it.
Okay first I will go over 3am I liked the story but one problem that did bother me is like when the person said something it was like this:

"hey liam."I said to liam with a smile."hey Becca."He said back kissing me on the cheek.

do this way:

"Hey Liam."I said to him with a smile.

"Hey becca."Liam said kissing me on the cheek.

Other wise from that it was honestly good.I liked it. and for the I'll love you till it hurts it only had one chapter but I could tell it would have been a good story ,but it is kind of new to the site so update :P

Good job girls :P

Notes

ugh have to get up to plug my laptop in!!!
the struggles these days!