One direction annoying and stupid moments!

okay when you first write a story the chapter should not be like so small.My opinion it should be actually one of the biggest also don't do the first chapter all about her or him...like if its a girl don't do the first chapter on what she likes and her story.Honestly people like to know about that stuff through out the story and if it has no effect on the story like her fav color is blue no point.But the chapter should be your best written longest chapter.It should draw people some what in.

-brittany the red head

Notes

when i wrote this my laptop was like lag city.it would not stop lagging I'm surprised i was able to write it! :p byeee talk to you people later