
One direction annoying and stupid moments!
Too much people!
Well this one is a HUGE pet peeve.Way to many people in the story.Like you don’t need to add 12 people that we need to learn the names.Only the huge ones in the story.For example.The name I will use for examples is Ally.
So heres the people:
Ally(Main)
Harry
Zayn
Louis(Main)
Niall
Liam
Flaire(only needed for 1 chapter)
Bob(crazy ex)
Alison(only 1 chapter)
maci
emily(only one chapter)
jay(not even in the story)
emrald(only 2 cahpters
Cookie(the dog)
and then only like 3 people are in more than 2 chapters.Get what I am saying.
Not too much people!
-brittany
No hurt feelings or hate :)Notes
My first chapter one my first fanfic!Hopefully you stick around!
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