Reviews!!!!!

Eyes Open:
My rating if the rest of the story is as good as the first chapter:10
Myrating if it starts to get not as interesting and well written:7
Grammatical errors so far: none that I saw.

You have amazing spaceing. You are an amazing writer, you make it very interesting, and its only the first chapter! You make it very emotional. Like I was almost crying at the end of the chapter. I was glad there was only one chapter, otherwise I probably would be crying.

Usually I try to point out something that could be changed, but as of now, I have nothing.



By the way, I was looking for finding love, and it wasn't there. When I searched it, there weren't any results. Sorry!

Notes

Don't forget to vote! So far these are the statistics:
Harry:1
Louis:0
Niall:0
Liam:0
Zayn:1

Also an update for the waiting list:
1. Lips & Regrets From @uthoughtiwasgone!hhahahahha 2. New Girl from @Stampy Cat
3. A Girl Called 'It' From @Erin_Elizabeth_ Direction 4. His or Mine from @Missesonedirection94
5. The Hitchhiker from @raylee

Shout out to @ArianaGrandeIsCool for being the first to vote!