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Reviews!!!!!

Bullies to Kidnappers, Sold to 1d + sequel

Sold to 1D:
My rating: 10
Grammatical errors: Very few

The story was very interesting. I enjoyed it. It had good content, the chapters aren't too long or short. It was easy to read, due to the lack of grammatical and spelling errors. Overall, it was an amazing story.

Never the Same Without You (Sequel to Sold to 1D)
My rating: (so far) 10
Grammatical errors: Few

This story is really good. Its a real page-turner and leaves me wondering what is going to happen next. You do use some cliffhangers, but not too many. I'm super excited for the next chapter!

Bullies to Kidnappers
My rating:(so far) 9.5Gr
Gamatical errors: few

The story is good, but it could be spaced out a bit more. Like in the prologue (for example)
Niall said "To make you go to hell." I said "I'll meet you ther

It would be easier to read like this:

Niall said, "To make you go to hell."

I said, "I'll meet you there."

It may be more time consuming, but it really makes it look better. Its also easier to read, and will attract more people to your story.

Other then that your story/ stories are amazing!

Notes

First review for @Niallsgirl1

Comments

Title : 'Dangerous'
Author : Perla1D
How Fast : Take your time babe x
Smut : Nope there's no smut .
Thanks ! And please be honest if it's good then I'm happy ,and if it's awful then okay ,I'll try harder next time !

Perla1D Perla1D
7/4/14

Can you do my story, Alter?

svmmertime svmmertime
6/19/14

If you've got the time could you review Obsessed for me? It's only just started but some feedback would be ultra nice :] xx

redsugar. redsugar.
5/22/14

Could you review Melancholia love? xxx

vanityrose. vanityrose.
5/20/14

Don't Forget Where You Belong
Story of my Life

WritingAddict55 WritingAddict55
5/20/14