
Reviews!!!!!
Bullies to Kidnappers, Sold to 1d + sequel
Sold to 1D:
My rating: 10
Grammatical errors: Very few
The story was very interesting. I enjoyed it. It had good content, the chapters aren't too long or short. It was easy to read, due to the lack of grammatical and spelling errors. Overall, it was an amazing story.
Never the Same Without You (Sequel to Sold to 1D)
My rating: (so far) 10
Grammatical errors: Few
This story is really good. Its a real page-turner and leaves me wondering what is going to happen next. You do use some cliffhangers, but not too many. I'm super excited for the next chapter!
Bullies to Kidnappers
My rating:(so far) 9.5Gr
Gamatical errors: few
The story is good, but it could be spaced out a bit more. Like in the prologue (for example)
Niall said "To make you go to hell." I said "I'll meet you ther
It would be easier to read like this:
Niall said, "To make you go to hell."
I said, "I'll meet you there."
It may be more time consuming, but it really makes it look better. Its also easier to read, and will attract more people to your story.
Other then that your story/ stories are amazing!
Notes
First review for @Niallsgirl1
Title : 'Dangerous'
Author : Perla1D
How Fast : Take your time babe x
Smut : Nope there's no smut .
Thanks ! And please be honest if it's good then I'm happy ,and if it's awful then okay ,I'll try harder next time !
7/4/14