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Your story is starting off really good. I think the first chapter is great. It gives alot of detail. I really like how you explained him cutting her. I could imagine it clearly. I got confused though, is August a boy? On the second chapter, I think instead of writing a short chapter in a limited amount of time, wait til you can write a longer chapter. I think it is a good story though.

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5/7/14

Can you review my story 'Promises were meant to be broken' it would mean a lot. Thank you

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5/7/14

Can you reveiw my book little miss perfect please thnx♡♥♡

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5/7/14

Hey love its me again :)
just wondering when you have the time to review my story A Girl Called It?
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5/6/14

Hey could you review my stories Lips & Regrets and Summertime Sadness??? Thanks doll <3

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