So You Think You Can Type
The Love♥
I never thought I'd every say this about any fanfiction, but here it comes: This is almost as good as After on wattpad. This is one of your anyday love stories but its REALLY good.
There are some noticeable grammatical errors and a few run on sentences but with a storyline this interesting , it doesn't even matter. But if you reading this One Crazy Mofo you might want to reread and edit your chapters. Maybe have a co-author that can be your editor ( I would be glad to fill the position) But all in all , its really good. 10/10 cupcakes
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The story is about how a girl named Emma meets the flirtatious and charming, Niall Horan. There start develop a relationship when out of nowhere Harry ( whom is dating Emma's best friend, Rachael) starts to be flirty with her and becomes touchy, feely with her but neither Emma, Niall or Rachael are having it. Stick around for the story that will have you on your heals.
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The Love♥
http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/31095/The-Love/
Can you review my story? Its called Friend Or Foe. Its quite different from the story's I've written so I wondered if I could have you're take on it?
Also I'm dyslexic so my spelling and grammar may be not that great in some places but also, Usually when a character is talking and maybe I miss a certain letter out of the word. That'll be deliberate because is shows the accent of the character more.
For example a character says "Coz or don know, or is, instead of his"
So "Is alright" She said.
Instead of "His alright"
That type of spelling will be on purpose...
So yeah, please review? :D
http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/41829/Friend-Or-Foe/
4/14/14