Can you review my story? Its called Friend Or Foe. Its quite different from the story's I've written so I wondered if I could have you're take on it?
Also I'm dyslexic so my spelling and grammar may be not that great in some places but also, Usually when a character is talking and maybe I miss a certain letter out of the word. That'll be deliberate because is shows the accent of the character more.
For example a character says "Coz or don know, or is, instead of his"
Can you review my story? Its called Friend Or Foe. Its quite different from the story's I've written so I wondered if I could have you're take on it?
Also I'm dyslexic so my spelling and grammar may be not that great in some places but also, Usually when a character is talking and maybe I miss a certain letter out of the word. That'll be deliberate because is shows the accent of the character more.
For example a character says "Coz or don know, or is, instead of his"
So "Is alright" She said.
Instead of "His alright"
That type of spelling will be on purpose...
So yeah, please review? :D
http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/41829/Friend-Or-Foe/
4/14/14