Reviews with the Reader

Holy shit. This story was top notch. I can't believe that I didn't know about this story sooner, and hadn't come across it before you requested it! It was absolutely amazing; there were virtually no grammar errors or any others at that.

I literally found seven errors in your entire eight chapters, in which are wonderfully long and beautifully written. Just before you post read over your chapters before you post them. I can definitely tell that you re-read your chapters, because like I said there were virtually no errors.

Also I was curious about your title. I wasn't quite sure I it was the town or ships name. It might come up later though, so I'm ok with it and is not really an issue, I was just curious about it.

I don't really have a lot to correct, so I guess I'll move on to commentary. I personally think that this is one of the highest quality fan fictions I have read so far, and yes even better than some popular ones I have read. I would absolutely love to keep reading this, and recommend this anyone who's looking for a high quality story read. I feel kind of bad since this review is a lot shorter than others, but that's a good thing to sometimes.

Overall rating: 10.0

Notes

If you found something that may be offensive or don't like about your review, let me know and I will take it down ASAP! I hoped I helped you in creating a better story and other future fan fictions.

❤ This_Crazy_Girl

Thanks for the amazing story!