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Nostalgia Academy

I say this every time, but if you haven’t read my other reviews, I’ll say it again, I review from top to bottom. Title, cover, summary, characters, and then chapters.

So title. I like it! Very cool! Nothing else to review there.

Cover. I’m not sure what’s it’s supposed to be. I can’t see all of it. When you are making a story, make sure to test out a cover, before you have it as a permanent cover. I mean like just to see if it fits.

Summary. LOVED! Great job! You explained the outline of your story perfectly, without giving away to much. Kudos!

Characters! Your character summary are very original! Very unique! I reallllyyyyy liked it (not to mention, the boys because they “looked so perfect” in those pictures!) There’s also not that many characters, so again kudos!

Chapters. I LOOVVEEEEDDDD the Prologue!!! It was GORGEOUS writing!! Very organized! Loved it! You also used pretty big words, like to explain things, and describe things. Like you use awesome nouns, adjectives, and verbs. Most people use like “Ran” “Pretty” “Park” you use (I’m not sure you actually used these words but for examples) “Sprinted” Attractive” and “play area” like does that make sense? Haha. Anywho! You are a very talented writer! I want more! But do make sure, that you stick with one accent. Mum or mom stick with one, I noticed that you started out with mum and then changed to mom. Great job otherwise! Keep it up!!

Notes

Enjoy love! Thanks for chance to find your amazing story!

Comments

@Oops_Hi

Hii! Yeah I'm still (kind of) active. I could probably do it, but it could be a while I usually get on like once a week. But I might be able to make some time. c: can't wait!

This_crazy_girl This_crazy_girl
8/27/15

ntEeeyyyyy back again this account use to be called Goldenheart. You reviewed Secrets(use to be called Stand), and Captured which both times helped, so I got another Fanfic if you do not mind checking out its just the start of it though. It's Called Angles and Demons. please and thank you I dont know if you are still active though. and if you wouldnt mind please do another review of Secrets since we added a lot. again please and thank you.

Hi_Oops Hi_Oops
8/21/15

Could you do A Feeling That I Can't Fight? It was my first fanfiction and I don't know how I did on it. Please and thank you ;D

I don't know if I asked yet or not lol but coukd you please review my story (how you changed my life) because its my first fanfic ever and I would like on advice and would like to know how I'm doing

Please can you review my story (I am addicted to you). I would like to know what people think of it. <3