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So, when I review stories I like to start from the top and work down. Title, cover, summary, characters, and then chapters. So first Title.

I love the title. Even though I didn’t know what it meant (at first) but now that I know what it means, I love it. Its original, that’s a nice change.

Cover. When I look for a new story to read, I always look at the cover. I judge books by their covers (but doesn’t everyone) so I would definitely click on this story to start reading. Also, the second cover, your friend made I FREAKING LOVE THAT ONE! It’s gorgeous! A+ on that!

The summary was really good. I really liked the summary! It was well sentenced. I did find like two spelling mistakes, they were the words “Enterprises” & “Decision” if you want go back and fix those two spelling mistakes. Also you added apostrophes where they were not needed, in the two words “Gets” and “Thinks” they had unnecessary apostrophes. So if you want to fix those then it would actually be literally PUR-FECT!

Next is character. One of my biggest pet peeves when I read stories is that there are too many characters! Okay. There are about 8 characters. I think it’s a perfect amount. I really like how you realize that the characters go in alphabetical order and you named them accordingly. Also. I don’t think I’ve ever read a story where the mains are numbered so that they are first. I REALLY LOVED THAT ASPECT! That made it so easy to distinguish who were the mains. I liked how you described the characters too! Gorgeous job on that!
So. Next Chapters. The three you have are SUPER long. I think if you would’ve spread them out more, like leave the readers on cliffhangers. I think it would be better. But I know how much work goes into writing, and really appreciate how much of YOUR time and effort you put into writing those chapters. I read only the first chapter because it was super long. I saw absolutely NO spelling mistakes. NONE! I did spot like two grammar mistakes. Like example you spelt your instead of you’re. Where I think you meant you are. But other than that, I found no other things. Like I said I only read the first chapter because it was suppppeeerrrr long.

I can tell that you worked REALLY hard on this story. I really appreciate it all your extreme hard work. Keep it up boo! Much love!

Notes

Hello! Lia I hope you enjoy this review! Much love!!!

Comments

@Oops_Hi

Hii! Yeah I'm still (kind of) active. I could probably do it, but it could be a while I usually get on like once a week. But I might be able to make some time. c: can't wait!

This_crazy_girl This_crazy_girl
8/27/15

ntEeeyyyyy back again this account use to be called Goldenheart. You reviewed Secrets(use to be called Stand), and Captured which both times helped, so I got another Fanfic if you do not mind checking out its just the start of it though. It's Called Angles and Demons. please and thank you I dont know if you are still active though. and if you wouldnt mind please do another review of Secrets since we added a lot. again please and thank you.

Hi_Oops Hi_Oops
8/21/15

Could you do A Feeling That I Can't Fight? It was my first fanfiction and I don't know how I did on it. Please and thank you ;D

I don't know if I asked yet or not lol but coukd you please review my story (how you changed my life) because its my first fanfic ever and I would like on advice and would like to know how I'm doing

Please can you review my story (I am addicted to you). I would like to know what people think of it. <3