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Review for Plunge
Its Jamal and I (I being Paige lmao) but I’m sorry for the late review but here it is baby girl! Oh! And we live in Canada too!!! <3
Title: Plunge
Author: A girl with a dream
Okay, so I like the title summary thing, it entices me to look into you story. Jamal thinks the cover could use some sprucing up, and I conquer with that. I LOVE LOVE LOVE your summary! No spelling/grammar mistakes, and its well laid out, well written, and it makes sense!!! Kudos! The characters are AWESOME! Not so little, not too many! So that’s great! Okay chapter Uno!
It’s quite long to start off with, and I went ahead and looked at chapter 2 before I read chapter 1, and it’s long too. But I do like the random facts! I think that a cool thing to do! Okay so, to start off with chapter one. Okay, to start off with, I used to live in Florida too, so the way you described the weather was spot on! Um, I really like how you are describing things, some authors couldn’t care less, but you are taking your time making sure that the readers could actually visualize the scene, and Jamal and I both could visualize the scene. So great job on that baby! The way you described Harry was sooooo perfect! I just love that! It was amazing! The rest of the chapter was seriously beautiful! Perfectly described, gorgeously written, and details! You have details!!! There are VERY little spelling/grammar mistakes! And yeah, next chapter!!
Chapter 2! Once again….I fucking love it! You’re such a talented writer! There is ABSOLUTELY nothing wrong with your story! Perfectly written, I love all the details! I can picture the scenes in my head…..which is a FAB thing!!! I love how Cass is playing hard to get, and a normal fan fiction Harry would have usually gotten the girl already and everything would be moving way too fast. But you’re story is so PERFECT!
Overall rating: out of 10….1000000000!!!! Your story is phenomenal!!! Out of this world! You’re such a talented writer! You actually take the time to make sure you have no mistakes in your writing, you take the time to plan it all out, and have details. The only thing I would say is the cover does not do your story justice, I would fix that up, and I know the best person to make a cover for you! If you want! I hope you appreciate this review!!! We love you!!!! Muah baby! :*****
Notes
Sorry for it being so late, forgive us! We love you!!!
<3
4/6/15