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Review For: Will I Ever See You Again?
Story: Will I Ever See You Again?
Author: LIZZY THAT GIRL
Review:
Okay I've been reading this story since you've started it and it's amaZayn. You only have a few grammar mistakes with is excellent. The summary is great because it grabs the attention of the readers. Also when you put flashbacks you shouldn't need to say "flashback" maybe finish the flashback with well that was then and this is now or maybe put it italics or something like that. Your readers should be able to tell its a flashback without you having to say "flashback". Your plot is very good. But it seems a little overused.(My opinion.) But somehow you make it work! :)
If you do not like your review I'm sorry. This is my honest opinion. So please do not get mad about what I said, because it is my opinion.
Notes
Okay so that's what I'm going to put after every review that I review. Also this is my first review on this story. :)
~Megan
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4/6/15