Seriously? Fanfiction annoying moments, reviews & polyvores!
Whose who?
When it's a really long section of conversations and it's not labeled who says what after a certain point. Seriously? Label the damn things. Example.
"Why did you cheat in me!"
"I didn't cheat you, you cheated on me!"
"Your such a hypocrite!"
Where as it should be:
"Why did you cheat on me!" Harry yelled.
"I didn't cheat on you, you cheated on me!" Katie yelled back.
"Your such a hypocrite!" Harry responded back loudly.
Come on now people. Get a game plan together.
Notes
Hey girls. Here's another update! Hope you enjoyed it! Btw. It's Jamal here! I hurt my ankle at work, so I have quite a bit if time to update for you guys! I'm hanging out with your favorite author now, watching "the amazing spider man." Paige LOVES all the spider man movies! So, yeah! It's possible that more updates will post up tonight. Not sure. We have to take up early, for church (Paige and I had a bad week) but were better now. Thanks for the patience in waiting for an update! Much love!
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4/6/15