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Title: Visiting Hours

Author: Zaynlove

Review:

First of all….I FUCKING LOVE YOUR COVER!!!!! It makes me want to read more of your story, it intrigues me, so that’s great!! So next, the short description is also FUCKING AWESOME!! Again, makes me want to click into it and start reading! But I do see one thing, I don’t know what “Childrens War” means? So maybe you could enlighten me with the meaning of that! :)

Well… now that I click into the story I see in the summary that you meant “Ward” not “War.” So maybe you could fix that very little typo. :) OH! The cover in the summary is AWESOME! I love the animation! Brilliam! The summary is gorgeously written, I saw very, very few mistakes on the grammar and spelling mistakes! So, kudos on that baby! I appreciate the time you put into your writing! Great job!

So before I click into the chapters, I want to address the characters. Why are they all like a link? To tinypic? I’m a bit confused by that. But, kudos, on not having to many characters. One of my biggest pet peeves, is having to many characters in a ff. So awesome. And little zayn is so damn cute!!!!! Omg!! Okay so first chapter.

Your idea is very original, and I love that it’s not a cliché. There are literally no spelling mistakes, and no grammar mistakes. I just have nothing negative to say about your story, absolutely NOTHING! Dare I say, your story is PERFECT!!! It’s beautiful! It’s flawless! Your story “Woke up like dis…” literally though! Don’t change a thing, its perfect!

Notes

Enjoy baby girl!