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It Never Ends

That Girl.

*Louis’s POV*

My mind was in another dimension today.

There’s always that one person who you could never get out of your mind.

illianna.

illianna Malik was her name.

And playing soccer was her game.

She was the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.

She had the perfect skin tone. The perfect hair. The perfect eyes. The perfect dimples. The perfect teeth.

She had everything.

But most importantly, she had the love for the game. Our game, soccer.

She played on the varsity team for crying out loud.

What more could a guy ask for.

You could give me a soccer ball and I’ll be happy for a day.

Give me a girl and I’ll be happy for the night.

But give me a girl who loves the ball just as much as I do, and I’ll be set for life.

And that girl was illianna.

illianna was a junior at our high school.

Me being a senior, I wanted to have my last year memorable.

And it needed to include illianna by my side.

But there was a problem though.

illianna’s older brother, Zayn, a starter for our varsity soccer team, and a senior as well.

Zayn was a good best friend, teammate, and a good guy to have by your side, but when it came to illianna, she was off-limits to everyone. Including me.

Zayn had warned me to not get near his sister, but it’s too hard to resist.

illianna was all I ever thought about.

Her beauty and soccer skills were too hard for me to ignore.

We had so much in common.

Well, not a lot.

But we both played the midfield position.

Our jersey numbers were the same. Number three.

And soccer was life for us.

More than what anyone can think.

I needed illianna. I wanted her. And I was determined to get her.

Soccer practice had just finished and I was in the locker room changing clothes quickly, desperate to catch illianna.

The girls’ soccer team was practicing on the other side of the boys’ field, which was rare.

The girls’ always practiced on their own field.

And seeing illianna run drills made me play even better.

I wanted her to notice me.

I shoved my practice clothes into my training bag to wash over the weekend and to pack a new pair for practice on Monday.

I made sure to get a clean scent, wanting to hide any sweat or outdoor smell that might be unattractive to illianna.

I was able to avoid Zayn’s raft and sneak out the locker room without any of the guys’ noticing.

To my luck, illianna is standing out in front of the girls’ locker room.

My heart skips a beat and my stomach flips.

illianna is standing, leaning against the wall with her training bag on the floor beside her.

She wears her athletic training soccer pants with our school soccer shirt and her Adidas sandals.

A beanie rested lopsided on her long, dark hair.

She didn’t have to dress like the other girls.

She was perfect the way she was.

illianna is typing away on her IPhone.

She looks up and notices me.

I forgot that I had stopped and stared.

“Hey Louis!” illianna smiles.

Her dimples forming and her pearly whites glowing.

It’s now or never.

“illianna! You looked good out there on the field today.” I return walking towards her, my bag slumped on my shoulder.

“Not too bad yourself. You’re going to have to teach me some of your midfield skills.” She jokes sliding her phone in her pocket.

“If your brother says it okay.” I respond seeing her smile crack a bit.

She knows how over protective her brother is.

“Speaking of him, is he almost done? I want to take my time in getting ready for the party tonight.” illianna asks.

“You’re coming to my party tonight?” I ask amused.

Zayn never let illianna hang out with me or the other guys.

“Yeah. Surprise, surprise.” illianna responds sarcastically. “Aren’t you excited?”

“Yes! I’ve been waiting for this.” I cheer.

She smiles warmly at me and gently pushes me.

I pretend to fall back hard.

She pushes me harder, but I quickly grab her and spin her around.

She giggles and it’s just Heaven in my ears.

I keep her in my arms a little longer and began to release her but she tugs on me a little tighter.

“Louis! illianna!” We hear Zayn shout.

I quickly let go of illianna and look back at him.

“Took you long enough.” illianna complains picking her bag up.

Zayn grabs the bag from her and slides it on his own shoulder next to his.

“Sorry.” He apologizes. “Getting the vibes on my sister Louis?”

“We were just talking. She was standing out here waiting for you.” I defend.

Zayn nods his head thankfully.

“Well we’ll see you tonight. Your party starts at ten right?” Zayn confirms.

“Yeah. Ten till whenever.” I chuckle.

illianna laughs.

“See you then.” Zayn says.

“Yeah. See you.” I return.

I watch them as they walk away.

The fact that Zayn makes illianna revolve her life around his ways is revolting and it angers me.

But what can I do?

How can Zayn deprive illianna from hanging out with the guys or being in a relationship?

And why is he changing his ways all of a sudden?

But none of that matters right now.

Tonight is going to be the night.

Hopefully I can see illianna tonight and maybe tell her what was really on my mind.










Notes

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Comments

cuteeee

Well, I just finished to read this story and I'm amazed. It's just great. Thumbs up :)

I'm so devastated! I thought they would win!!!

Love_Life3 Love_Life3
6/26/14

@DirectedOneWay
Yeah, nice talking to you.

@illianna Fuentes


It was nice to meet you ! (:

glowstick. glowstick.
6/23/14