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Gone

Forty-One

"You okay?" Niall asked.
He wrapped his arm around my shoulder as I rested my head against his warm burly chest.
"Yeah, I'm fine," I breathed.
I was still feeling a little bit dizzy. He studied me closely for a moment, a look of concern on his face.
"Shall we get going then?" He said slowly, motioning to the door.
He stood up and held out his hand for me to grab onto.

My head didn't stop spinning until we hopped into the car. As soon as my eyesight had returned to normal, I noticed he was wearing a checked blue and green hoodie with blue skinny jeans and darker coloured shoes I couldn't see as they were swallowed by the darkness surrounding us.
"Are you going to tell me where we're off to?" I asked.
He smirked as he backed out of the driveway, staring into his rear view mirrors.
"You look great," he grinned, changing the subject with ease, "I like your top,"
I laughed.
"Thanks but you're not going to get out of it that easily. Now, where are we going. You know I'm not a fan of surprises,"
"Is that so?" he said mysteriously.

About half an hour passed. And quite quickly too. We still hadn't run out of things to talk about when he suddenly took a sharp left and then a sharp right and parked in a carpark near a small amusement park. The sign said Fondles Park. I had never been here before.

The park looked absolutely fantastic with the bright lights and the stereotypical circus themed music blaring in the background. The thing that caught my eye was the gigantic ferris wheel probably plastered in the centre of it all. We could see it from the gates. We lined up behind a middle-aged brunette lady and her two kids, both of whom looked around eight or nine. We were fourth in line. It wasn't long before it was our turn.The ticket guy stared at us blankly. The name tag on his blue and white uniform said Bob. A plain name for a plain man.
"Two students please," Niall said with a smile.
He was so adorable.

"That comes to twenty three dollars and forty cents. Would you like to buy an extra ticket for half price," Bob asked in a montone.
"No thanks," Niall replied, handing him the money.
Bob ripped off two tickets from the ticket dispenser and gave them to him.
"Make sure you follow all the rules and enjoy yourself. At Fondles Park we like to ensure that you have fun in a safe and happy environment,"
He sounded almost sarcastic.

I took out my wallet and offered Niall the fifty dollar note I had brought along just in case but he refused profusely.
"No way," he said, "this is a date. I'm paying,"
I didn't argue because it wasn't really my money to begin with. I had stolen it from the not so secret money jar we had for emergencies because I didn't have any money left. I had spent all of it on the second season of 2 Broke Girls. I couldn't help that it was on special.

Niall led me through the gates and into the park, our hands intertwined. We followed a red path through the middle, constantly getting distracted with all the rides and games before finally coming to a large roller coaster. I stopped in my tracks and watched in awe as the people screamed with both fright and excitement, the cart moving down the steep slope.
"You wanna go on that?" He chuckled.
I nodded.

I loved roller coasters. They were the best thing about theme parks. I loved the feeling of the wind in my hair. The way the carriage peeked over the edge and I don't know when it's going to drop. The adrenaline rush as I almost free fall down the slope at top speed. There was nothing better.
"Oh, okay...um sure, we can...if you want to," he babbled.
Was he afraid of heights?

Notes

DONE!!

Comments

So I gave up on Ghost obvs but I have a new story up now called Bravery which I think you guys might like because it's the same sort of thing but with a refreshing new twist :)

ishipbullsh_t ishipbullsh_t
10/22/14

K so I have finished Gone so now I'm writing the sequel...make sure you keep an eye out because I'm currently working on the first chapter of it. Despite its title 'Ghost' it is not what you think it would be about. It's not 'one of those'. I promise it is going to be a unique story just like my first one and if you enjoyed the first one you will definitely want to find out what happens next! I kinda left it open...
Anyways I'm back from camp so internet but I don't have my laptop tonight as my Dad has it in his car and he's currently at the city :/ Don't fret though because he is dropping it over tomorrow :)
Anyways so keep your eyes peeled because I loved writing Gone and NEED to write the sequel while it's still fresh in my mind :)
Love you all and thank you so much for all the support I hope you continue to read my work. If you want you can comment and I'll message you personally letting you know when my story is up (if you are that dedicated which would be cool but i highly doubt anyone is apart from maybe one or two peeps)
I'm babbling though so imma work on it a bit and submit the first chapter asap-either tonight and if not then definitely the next day or so <3
Bye for now but definitely not forever

ishipbullsh_t ishipbullsh_t
6/27/14

@crushingonniall
awwww that sucks :'( :'( I haven't got tix yet but my fam is putting in for them and I'm going with my Mum (she love Lou but is kind of a carrot bc she knows the lyrics to all their songs thanks to me but she doesn't really like them...she only puts up with them because she has to). I reckon though when I'm not home she sings 1D songs at the top of her voice
Don't worry, you'll get to see them one day :)

ishipbullsh_t ishipbullsh_t
6/22/14

omg niallllll I've been sobbing 4 hours straight my mom told me i can't go to the 1d concert next week which i was supposed to go to:( bc of some stupid family thing and no1 is going with me:( I'm gonna cry for 2 days(24+25june)

crushingonniall crushingonniall
6/22/14