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Gone

Thirty-One

I laughed nervously as he pulled out a huge white and red torch, a few pillows, and a maroon, blue, and green tartan picnic blanket from his bag. How had he managed fit all of that in there, I wondered. He placed the pillows and blanket on a flat bit of ground and lay down, motioning for me to do the same. As I did so, he immediately turned the torch on and sat it on the edge of the blanket so that we could see each other but it wasn't going to shine in our eyes. He gave my hand an affectionate squeeze. I grinned as I stared into his sparkly light blue eyes. His face was so perfectly lit that he anyone would have mistaken him for a Grecian God.

The stars had become more and more visible the later it got. They now covered the sky, twinkling at me. It would've been at least half past twelve by now.To be honest, I was getting kind of sleepy. Not enough to doze off again though.The only thing I wanted to do right now was stay up all night with Niall. And maybe make out. Okay, definitely make out. It was so nice being able to just kiss him and not have to worry about him taking it any further. Not that I didn't want him to. Of course I did. Just...not now. Not tonight, not on the first date. Despite the long-winded fling I had had with Josh, I did have standards.
"You're so beautiful Kaia," he whispered softly in my ear.
His voice was delicate and tuneful, almost like a song. For the first time in forever, I was speechless for a positive reason. No one had ever said that to me before and meant it. I could tell that he had by the tone of voice he said it in.

***

I woke up to the sharp trill of several rainbow lorikeets sitting above us on a branch. As my brain became less foggy and my eye sight less blurry, I realised I had survived. I had survived my first ever night with a guy that hadn't ended in more than a steamy make-out session. Well, it was true. Every time I had fallen asleep with a guy, something bad had happened. The best part was, he wasn't just any guy, he was my boyfriend. When I rolled over to face Niall, he wasn't there. Oh my God. I knew something bad was going to happen. It was all too good to be true. Where the hell was he, I asked myself. I propped myself up onto both elbows and squinted as I scanned the vicinity in an attempt to find him.

I gave up and stood up, my legs wobbling as they adjusted to being used. I could feel beads of sweat developing on my forehead and cheeks. It would've at least been thirty degrees (celcius) today.
"Niall?" I called out, "Niall, where are you?"
No one answered. I didn't want to sound like a complete nong, screaming his name for no reason, so I didn't shout, at least not loudly. I mean, honestly he could've been anywhere. As the heat started to get to me, I became more frantic.
"Niall? Why won't you answer me?"
I spun in circles trying to not to panic. The ground became a dizzy blur. As I collapsed into a heap, I heard footsteps on the pebbles, coming closer. I was too weak to lift my head Suddenly, they quickened as if in a sudden panic.

Notes

FINISHED THIS CHAPTER YAY!!! <3 BTW my 3g is now fixed!! YAY! 3g=regular updates

10 points (i can't physically give you points but whatevs) to the first person who can spot the one direction reference... :D (i'm not a carrot. Honestly, I didn't even know I had written it until after I pressed submit)


Comments

So I gave up on Ghost obvs but I have a new story up now called Bravery which I think you guys might like because it's the same sort of thing but with a refreshing new twist :)

ishipbullsh_t ishipbullsh_t
10/22/14

K so I have finished Gone so now I'm writing the sequel...make sure you keep an eye out because I'm currently working on the first chapter of it. Despite its title 'Ghost' it is not what you think it would be about. It's not 'one of those'. I promise it is going to be a unique story just like my first one and if you enjoyed the first one you will definitely want to find out what happens next! I kinda left it open...
Anyways I'm back from camp so internet but I don't have my laptop tonight as my Dad has it in his car and he's currently at the city :/ Don't fret though because he is dropping it over tomorrow :)
Anyways so keep your eyes peeled because I loved writing Gone and NEED to write the sequel while it's still fresh in my mind :)
Love you all and thank you so much for all the support I hope you continue to read my work. If you want you can comment and I'll message you personally letting you know when my story is up (if you are that dedicated which would be cool but i highly doubt anyone is apart from maybe one or two peeps)
I'm babbling though so imma work on it a bit and submit the first chapter asap-either tonight and if not then definitely the next day or so <3
Bye for now but definitely not forever

ishipbullsh_t ishipbullsh_t
6/27/14

@crushingonniall
awwww that sucks :'( :'( I haven't got tix yet but my fam is putting in for them and I'm going with my Mum (she love Lou but is kind of a carrot bc she knows the lyrics to all their songs thanks to me but she doesn't really like them...she only puts up with them because she has to). I reckon though when I'm not home she sings 1D songs at the top of her voice
Don't worry, you'll get to see them one day :)

ishipbullsh_t ishipbullsh_t
6/22/14

omg niallllll I've been sobbing 4 hours straight my mom told me i can't go to the 1d concert next week which i was supposed to go to:( bc of some stupid family thing and no1 is going with me:( I'm gonna cry for 2 days(24+25june)

crushingonniall crushingonniall
6/22/14