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Gone

Twenty-Six

Niall looked me up and down as he stood in the doorway. He wore faded grey jeans, a blue and grey hoodie that he had zipped up halfway, and white dancer shoes.
"You look great," he grinned.
Since when had I ever looked anything more than average? That was probably the first sincere compliment a guy has ever given to me in at least five years and therefore I found it hard not to argue with him. Honestly, he looked better than I did.
"Thank you," I replied, "you don't look so bad yourself,"
I tried my best to not be so obvious but he had this strange effect on me. It was like I couldn't control what I said around him. I spotted a red convertible parked in the driveway, obviously belonging to him.
"Wow, nice ride," I said out loud to no one in particular.

He opened the door for me and sat in the driver's seat, waiting for me to hop in. Off to a good start, I thought to myself. So far, it seemed as though he really had forgotten about what I'd accidentally said to him. I still didn't know where he was taking me. As I leant back in the comfy black leather seat and breathed in the fresh air, I realised it wouldn't matter where he took me, the most important thing was the company. From the short two minutes I had spent alone with him, the company didn't seem too bad.

***

After what seemed like forever, Niall finally stopped the car in front of a lake of some sort. The brisk breeze created ripples in the dark blue water as it shimmered in the moonlight, giving off a dim glow.
"We're here," he said.
Where exactly was here though? We definitely weren't in Dennington anymore, that's for sure. The real question was why were we here? He seemed anxious to get out of the car as he perched on the edge of the bonnet and gazed up at the sky. There was definitely something on his mind. I stepped out of the car and into the almost complete darkness to sit next to him. All I could hear was the low gurgle of a colony of bats as they flew above us, creating a cloud of black. The silence was almost empty as if it lacked something.
"I come here all the time to think," he finally spoke, "especially in these sorts of situations,"
He lay down on his back, his hand accidentally brushing up against the side of my waist, sending chills down my spine. I bit my lip to keep myself from shivering.

"I'm sorry about what she put you through," I said softly.
I lay down next to him. I couldn't see him properly but I could feel his eyes on me, boring into my skin.
"Kaia?"
His silvery voice was now barely above a whisper. I had to move as close as I could, just to hear his voice.
"Yes Niall?"
He didn't answer right away.
"I think I might really like you," he choked out, "as more than a friend,"

Notes

FINISHED THIS CHAPTER :D




Comments

So I gave up on Ghost obvs but I have a new story up now called Bravery which I think you guys might like because it's the same sort of thing but with a refreshing new twist :)

ishipbullsh_t ishipbullsh_t
10/22/14

K so I have finished Gone so now I'm writing the sequel...make sure you keep an eye out because I'm currently working on the first chapter of it. Despite its title 'Ghost' it is not what you think it would be about. It's not 'one of those'. I promise it is going to be a unique story just like my first one and if you enjoyed the first one you will definitely want to find out what happens next! I kinda left it open...
Anyways I'm back from camp so internet but I don't have my laptop tonight as my Dad has it in his car and he's currently at the city :/ Don't fret though because he is dropping it over tomorrow :)
Anyways so keep your eyes peeled because I loved writing Gone and NEED to write the sequel while it's still fresh in my mind :)
Love you all and thank you so much for all the support I hope you continue to read my work. If you want you can comment and I'll message you personally letting you know when my story is up (if you are that dedicated which would be cool but i highly doubt anyone is apart from maybe one or two peeps)
I'm babbling though so imma work on it a bit and submit the first chapter asap-either tonight and if not then definitely the next day or so <3
Bye for now but definitely not forever

ishipbullsh_t ishipbullsh_t
6/27/14

@crushingonniall
awwww that sucks :'( :'( I haven't got tix yet but my fam is putting in for them and I'm going with my Mum (she love Lou but is kind of a carrot bc she knows the lyrics to all their songs thanks to me but she doesn't really like them...she only puts up with them because she has to). I reckon though when I'm not home she sings 1D songs at the top of her voice
Don't worry, you'll get to see them one day :)

ishipbullsh_t ishipbullsh_t
6/22/14

omg niallllll I've been sobbing 4 hours straight my mom told me i can't go to the 1d concert next week which i was supposed to go to:( bc of some stupid family thing and no1 is going with me:( I'm gonna cry for 2 days(24+25june)

crushingonniall crushingonniall
6/22/14