Kidnapping Her (Punk Niall)

Unknown's P.O.V

"Ah boys come in" Our head boss Simon said. "Whats up Simon?" I asked since I was the boss of us five. "I need you five to go to Holmes Chapel and kidnap this girl it's really important." Simon held up a picture of a girl. "She's Christiano Rhonaldo's daughter and he'd pay a fortune for her back." Simon said with his cigar in his hand and propping his feet in his desk. I coughed down the smoke that filled the room. It was like you'd see in a movie, dark room, one desk, one chair, on glass window in the corner and located in the back streets of a small town. Our gang had several mini gangs all across America and Europe, we were called "The Dragons".
"What's the chicks name" I asked taking the picture from him. "Carly Ronaldo" he said "In Holmes Chapel, England". he said and I nodded.

We walked out of the building and my eager mate turned to me "I call dibs if she's hot" Harry said "Don't get to attached you can't just kill the girl if she ticks you off" I warned Harry. Harry was the most lethal of us five.

"Nah man, she's just some random girl let it go, besides she'll just be some pampered chick" Niall said. He was the most cocky, but he had the lowest temper making him the one to take into public. He did most of our day jobs.

"Call Liam" I said to the boys. Liam was our car guy, whom did most of the repairs, grand theft auto, and hot wiring. "We need to go pick up Zayn from the bar and then we're going to Holmes Chapel" I said finishing orders. Zayn was the drug dealer of the group. "Yea Lou" Harry said but corrected himself "Boss".

(Yessika's P.O.V)

"Yessika runs up waiting for the pass from Carly on the left!!!There's the pass!!And she shoots!!!and she scores!!! Yessika Messi has done it again folks! Breaking the tie it is now 3 to 2 and with 1 minute left in the game I think this wraps the game up" the announcer announced.

My teammates ran and picked me up setting me on their shoulders. The refs blew the whistle and we had won the championship!
Everyone was screaming, cheering and most importantly the press wanted Carly and I for an interview.

So once we escaped we ran to the camera man "Ladies what would you like to say to the public?" he asked "We worked really hard out there tonight! And I guess the best team won in the end!" Carly said "Everyone played great tonight even the other team" I smiled. The camera man nodded, thanked us, and soon our dads were waiting for us.
We both ran to our dads and hugged them "Good game" they praised us.We chatted with them and soon everyone was leaving. "Good night" Carly said as we hugged. "Love you" we both said in sync and she left. I looked back at the field and walked to it again.

I texted my dad
I'll be home at 10 love u
I sent and dropped my soccer ball. I began driblling it again and playing with it. I shot it and it made a swish sound. "Nice shot" I jumped at the unfamiliar voice.I turned and faced a late teenager, maybe 20 years old. He had tattoos, piercings, and dark eyes that sent my danger radar off. "Thanks, I was just finishing here" I said turning around to fetch my ball.
I then bumped into another younger-looking guy with curly hair. "Looking for this?" he asked holding up my ball. I then took the ball scared to death. "Thanks but I really must be going" I began walking away.

"I'm sorry we didn't mean to scare you, I'm Louis" Louis stuck out his hand and I caustiouly took it. In that moment he flipped me around where my back was pressed to his chest and his hand over my open mouth before I could scream.

Oh hell to the NO! I'm not going to get kidnapped. I slammed down on Louis' foot with my cleats and bit his hand hard. He let go and I took off. No one in the soccer team could keep up with me and I doubt this two punk guys could.

I made my way to the woods near the small section of the woods into the trail that led to the parking lot. I got across it when I saw a black car. I didn't know who it was, but it had to be better than the two creeps following me. I ran to the drivers window and it was down.

It was nice looking guy. "Please sir you have to help me I have two crazy guys following me" I shouted "Get in Love" the back door opened and two more tatooed and pierced guys, thats when I realized they were all in the cahoots together. I started running again back into the grass, knowing I'd slide in the asphalt.

I finally got to the end of the grass, and would only have to jump the fence to get to the road. I began climbing it but then the two idiots arrived. "Come on girl get down" Curly said. "Carly we won't hurt you" Louis called. Wait they thought I was Carly? I needed to protect for her now.

I jumped into the side with the sidewalk still determined to get away. Yet as I was falling the other three showed up and caught me. I began kicking them and caught one in the face with my cleats.The other I kneed with my knee in their face. I then painfully pulled out the piercing of his lower lip.They all drop me and I landed with the breath out of me.

I got up and tried to run but one grabbed my ankle. I tried to run foward but with no prevail as my cleat slid across the cement making me fall face first. I knew it was the end. I was pulled up and two of the boys held me in place. Hahaha I'm just a girl that just kick their butts!

Louis and curly finally came and they did NOT look happy. "You're a fighter I"ll give you that" Louis smiled with an evil grin. Curly then pulled out a cloth and put it over my nose. I had seen this in movies once so I held my breath. "Screw it!" one of the boys me put his hand on my shoulder and pressed down.

And next thing I saw was black and I was out.

Notes

Should I keep going?