Things I Hate
No Detail.. At All..
Once in a while you'll see that story that is just.. no.
No.
For example -
*KYLIE'S POV*
Niall picked me up.
We went to his apartment.
Then we kissed for the first time. It was nice. I liked it.
"Niall, this is wrong."
"Then let's make it right."
So I stayed over at his apartment and we fell in love.
1. Where did Nialler pick you up from? How did it look? What did he say?!
2. How did the apartment look?
3. Did you talk before the kiss? Did you kiss him, or did he kiss you? Why was the kiss nice?
4. Why is is f'ing wrong?!
5. HOW DID YOU FALL IN LOVE!?!
I get if you're rushing and have to write the chapter quickly, there's no "save as draft" or something button.
Well, submit it as it is, then go back when you're not busy and add some details!!
Notes
If this offends you, I'm sorry, I LOVE YAS. ❤ ❥❤ ❥
yeah, sometimes when people do that when they're character is meant to be british and they are in England then this happens, these are some of the basics that everybody should know:
She handed him a dollar
WE USE POUNDS NOT DOLLARS
She or he asks for some soda
WE DO NOT USE THE WORD SODA (OR POP) ITS JUST A FIZZY DRINK, EITHER COKE, OR FANTA, OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT.
She eat lots of cookies
ITS BISCUITS! UNLES YOU'RE TALKING ABOUT A CERTAIN TYPE OF BISCUIT
He asked her "Do you want to see some soccer?"
ITS FOOTBALL
Thats what I get frustrated about, when there character is meant to be from England ;(
PS I do know this first hand because I am british....
sorry about the small rant on you're comments :)
4/19/14