Things I Hate
Plot Holes
Well, so I'm on my period, (fuck) but I don't want to talk about character's periods today.
Now, my fabulous creatures, let me rant.
Personally, my fear is plot holes.
I hate when you're reading a story - let's say it's about a zombie apocalypse. Let me demonstrate a beautiful story.
*CHAPTER ONE*
*MAY'S POV*
So there's a fucking zombie apocalypse, and I found One Direction with all my best friends and I sort of like Harry cuz he's sorta cute.
I NEEDA SAVE DA PEOPLEEEE OMG
*CHAPTER FIFTY* {Final chapter}
anyway harry and i had babies and now im a singer.
Oh, I'm sorry May. I couldn't hear you over that fucking zombie banging on your window.
Like, the author thinks of an idea, sticks with it for 2 chapters then fucks up the entire storyline with a chapter.
But that's not the only plot hole some authors make.
Sometimes it's just making the character a.. no.
I saw this in a couple stories before, but I forgot their names. Like, one of them I remember the plot a bit - and the plot pissed me off.
So the main character's father was a police officer, and she got kidnapped. I think it was something like that.
Excuse me bitch, but if you haven't noticed, Mr. Daddy could have saved you, but instead you fucked around and cried about being kidnapped with harry styles.
Notes
If you wrote a story like the one mentioned above {The daddy police} and you feel offended by my comment, then don't hesitate to tell me so I can take it off and not make you sad >:
yeah, sometimes when people do that when they're character is meant to be british and they are in England then this happens, these are some of the basics that everybody should know:
She handed him a dollar
WE USE POUNDS NOT DOLLARS
She or he asks for some soda
WE DO NOT USE THE WORD SODA (OR POP) ITS JUST A FIZZY DRINK, EITHER COKE, OR FANTA, OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT.
She eat lots of cookies
ITS BISCUITS! UNLES YOU'RE TALKING ABOUT A CERTAIN TYPE OF BISCUIT
He asked her "Do you want to see some soccer?"
ITS FOOTBALL
Thats what I get frustrated about, when there character is meant to be from England ;(
PS I do know this first hand because I am british....
sorry about the small rant on you're comments :)
4/19/14